Do you see now?

I thought out what I would have wanted this scene to look like if I ever drew it out in a comic..

Basically Zero saves the very people who once rediculed him when they found out he was a demon, and kicked him out of his very hometown..

I have the story thought out in my head, and considered many times over TRYING to draw it out into a comic.. maybe someday.. but the scene written out would be something like this...

Warning though.. I'm not an amazing writer, and I have to rewrite things many times over to have them even seem decent (Atleast the way I see it.) And this is the first time I'm writing this out. Neither is it a finalized version nor is it even fully detailed.


Zero breathed heavily and clutched his wound. Having defeated his enemy he turned to the ones that he saved, the very ones who banished him from the only place he could call home. They stared at him, frightened. He held his bloody hand out and yelled to them. " Do you see now that I too bleed?!! That I too am MORTAL?!! Please... Understand now that I too feel..." At that moment he lost consciousness and fell to the ground.



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